07-27-2018, 11:45 AM
(07-24-2018, 04:57 PM)Mattias Westlund Wrote: I wrote a short story called Greater things.
I just finished reading it. I like it. I found it interesting. I kept wondering what would happen next. Always a good sign in a story.
I only noticed one mistake, though I wasn't looking too hard. I was mostly interested in reading the story. Very first word on page 11 should be "be" not "bee". I can see how that would slip though a spell check.
Paul Battersby
My free orchestral sample library: Virtual Playing Orchestra @ http://virtualplaying.com
My free orchestral sample library: Virtual Playing Orchestra @ http://virtualplaying.com