Jon is actually a piece I wrote for a friend named Jon when he was tasked with writing music for a supermarket. I of course wrote the most generic supermarket music I could. XD
Sample library developer, composer, and amateur organologist at Versilian Studios.
I quite like it. I think you should remove the texture on the words, though, in favor of a solid color - ideally that same shade of beige (and ofc keep the drop shadow).
I like the general concept -- reminds me of a 1980's magazine ad! -- though I agree with Terry about the texture. Also, the photo could use a bit of retro-fying I think, maybe some grain and less vivid colors.
(10-21-2019, 05:06 PM)Mattias Westlund Wrote: I like the general concept -- reminds me of a 1980's magazine ad! -- though I agree with Terry about the texture. Also, the photo could use a bit of retro-fying I think, maybe some grain and less vivid colors.
I actually intentionally made it more vivid, haha. Wanted that sort of hyper-colorization like in VHS.
How about this? I purple-shifted the blues a bit and added more grain to give it an 'vintage' look and removed the texture on the text-
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Sam, I think that looks much better. I had a feeling you were actually going for a VHS type of look, but in that case the colors were wrong and it looked too modern. I don't know enough about analog video mediums to say what causes that typical colorization, but the new version looks more right!