09-16-2016, 06:11 PM
(09-15-2016, 01:48 AM)peastman Wrote: Your English is excellent. I wouldn't have guessed it wasn't your native language. I don't see anything to correct.
Huh, thanks. Well I guess maybe I don't need to worry overly much about that bit then.
Anyway, I have made some major updates to Chapter XVI: Redemption, including a completely reworked second part and and a bit towards the end with a lot of sound FX meaning to illustrate how Tyrin discovers Elyn's lifeless body. Let me know what you guys think about that.
Big question is though: should I return to some sad musical theme after that, or just leave it more or less as is? After all there will be a brief piece of music for the Epilogue so the whole album won't end this way.
