01-07-2019, 08:22 PM
+1 what Chris said.
On top of that you handle the orchestra very organ, hymn like, which is really cool. But I think the effect of the heaviness of this moving chord blocks would be even increased if you have a little counter line moving against the rhythm of the main melody. On top of that I think it's cool that the last chords are the most grand and lyric, however I think you could use some bass instruments (tuba and upright bass) to increase that effect on the last two chords. That way you have a little sub climax in that climax. I hope that is helpful, but I really like the melody, the orchestration and the atmosphere.
On top of that you handle the orchestra very organ, hymn like, which is really cool. But I think the effect of the heaviness of this moving chord blocks would be even increased if you have a little counter line moving against the rhythm of the main melody. On top of that I think it's cool that the last chords are the most grand and lyric, however I think you could use some bass instruments (tuba and upright bass) to increase that effect on the last two chords. That way you have a little sub climax in that climax. I hope that is helpful, but I really like the melody, the orchestration and the atmosphere.
