03-27-2019, 09:48 PM
I have a major update to all existing chapters coming up in a little while. I'm wrapping up the second and third Lilian chapters and when they're done I will be reordering everything into proper order. Which means most older links in this thread are going to break. As for the changes, there's a lot of minor details that have been added, for example the names of months which have been missing so far. I have a checklist of things here that I'm trying to weave into the storyline, mostly world/lore stuff, but there's also a number of alterations that are more important to the overall plot.
As mentioned earlier I'm not a fan of blatant exposition. Which, I think, has lead to me not conveying enough information in some cases. There are important clues that read like throwaway lines, so I've tried reinforcing those without being too on the nose.
So, I would really advise anyone who's been following this project so far to re-read the whole thing once the big update is released. I know it's a tall order, but the early chapters have things in them that weren't there when I first wrote them several months ago.
As mentioned earlier I'm not a fan of blatant exposition. Which, I think, has lead to me not conveying enough information in some cases. There are important clues that read like throwaway lines, so I've tried reinforcing those without being too on the nose.
So, I would really advise anyone who's been following this project so far to re-read the whole thing once the big update is released. I know it's a tall order, but the early chapters have things in them that weren't there when I first wrote them several months ago.